Thought I’d try something a bit different and use a couple of week’s worth of Friday Fictioneers to make a longer story.
The challenge will be molding each picture to the larger narrative, but everyone loves a challenge right?
Okay, disclaimer out of the way, please enjoy the first part of The Dire-Man.
The Dire-Man (pt 1)
When I was growing up, the house on the beach was where the Dire-Man lived. We never saw him, but our parents and older siblings would tell us that he stole children from their beds on full moons and took them to his red house. The house, three battered red walls and no roof, sat atop a rock on the edge of the surf.
When I returned to my family home years later, I told the stories to my children and soothed their fears and thought nothing of my parental cruelty.
Until my son vanished during the first full moon.
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Another Friday Fictioneers story with prompt supplied by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
32 replies on “Friday Fictioneers: The Dire-Man (pt 1)”
This is a great setup. I love it so far! I can’t wait for the next part.
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This is a great start. I can’t wait to see where this goes.
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Excellent launch!
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I like the name Dire-Man and even though this is an excellent first piece, it stands as its own story, too.
janet
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A well weaved tale.
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Well I’d say you are off to a great start. I look forward to the next installments of The Dire-Man
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The Dire-man is here to stay. Great start.
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I’m not that impressed with your parenting skills but the story’s great!
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Dear Sean,
I’ll be interested to see where this goes. Meanwhile, as Janet already said, this piece does stand on its own. Hope my next choice of prompt lends itself. 😉 Nice work.
shalom,
Rochelle
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Great start, that really makes us want to read more!
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Oooh I love mysteries. Convince the kids just before one is snatched. Sounds like a recipe for excitement. I’ll be the wife says “Why did you bring us here?”
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I can’t wait to see where we go on this journey.
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I can’t wait to see where this takes you next week.
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Charming bed time story. But I have a little typo for you, when the dire men stole the children, he “took them” not take them. Okay? Thanks.
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i love your idea, i hope to catch the rest 🙂
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Very entertaining and can’t wait until next weeks addition. I love mysteries so, thanks! Nan
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Chills. Sean, this is a wonderful blending of the myths we tell our kids, and the real struggle we can feel as parents. Gives me chills. Nice job!
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Holy crap! And then what happened?
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Very entertaining, now looking forward for part-II.
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so that’s how the dire man got started . . .
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